ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
half drunk on
two and a half glasses
of wine and song
tipsy with
Christmas spirit and half
of the bottle
staring and
licking sticky lips at
very long legs
six small shots
seven short pours
(more while no one’s looking)
half drunk on
three and a half glasses
of bared ankles
heat coursing
through happy veins in four
loose happy limbs
finishing
off the last half-bottle
of cheap white wine
running two
hot little hands
through luke-warm dishwater
half drunk on
that half-a-bottle of
love and laughter
swaying hips
and flirty green dresses
wishing goodnights
sweet toxins
to keep the night lusty
when all goes still
all but three
or four glasses
of hot blood in the veins
two and a half glasses
of wine and song
tipsy with
Christmas spirit and half
of the bottle
staring and
licking sticky lips at
very long legs
six small shots
seven short pours
(more while no one’s looking)
half drunk on
three and a half glasses
of bared ankles
heat coursing
through happy veins in four
loose happy limbs
finishing
off the last half-bottle
of cheap white wine
running two
hot little hands
through luke-warm dishwater
half drunk on
that half-a-bottle of
love and laughter
swaying hips
and flirty green dresses
wishing goodnights
sweet toxins
to keep the night lusty
when all goes still
all but three
or four glasses
of hot blood in the veins
Christmas Eve, probably 2001 (at 18 y.o), after waking up from a nap taken on half a bottle of wine I did dishes to. With some tweaking to rearrange the beat/pattern, later. As it stands, three sets of four verses of three brief lines, syllable-count for each verse going 3-6-4, 3-6-4, 3-6-4; 3-4-6. Visually arranged in a consistent spacing pattern.
© 2004 - 2024 BlindSwandive
Comments3
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
i loooove it! a little out of season but i know the feeling all the same!